WRITING - OUTLINE II BY Dr. YUSRAN

OUTLINE

1.     INTRODUCTION

A.   GENERAL STATEMENT

Do you know what the National Election is? It is a process choosing some people to fill the positions in this country, such as president, governor, regent, and many others. In Indonesia, the National election is famous with its campaign. Every candidate has his or her own ways to get many votes from the society.

B.   THESIS STATEMENT

However, the National election in Indonesia has not effective even we may say that as the failed election Because the impact of it like corruption.

2.     BODY

Ø  Corruption is one of the reasons by the failed National election.

3.     CONCLUSION

In short, the national election in this country has not effective. It is caused by the people who were elected in it. In the first time of their campaign, they promised to us that they would safe this country and make it better than before but all of that are bulshit. So the National election have to be improved and safed to get the better condition and the corruptor will be decrease.

THE EFFECT OF FAILED NATIONAL ELECTION IN INDONESIA

Do you know what the National Election is? It is a process choosing some people to fill the positions in this country, such as president, governor, regent, and many others. In Indonesia, the National election is famous with its campaign. Every candidate has his or her own ways to get many votes from the society. However, the National election in Indonesia has not effective even we may say that as the failed election Because the impact of it like corruption.

Too many  corruption in this country. It is one of the reasons why the national election is not effective in this country. When the candidates do the campaign, they will spend a lot of money to drive the votes. After  they are elected, some of them forget with their promises before. Too many facts that show us about the cases of corruption. Wee may see the case of Engelina Sondakh. everybody In this country has known about her. She took the money of Wisma Atlet Company more than Rp. 10 billion. Beside that, she transferred  some money to Mirwan Amir as much as Rp. 8 billion as well to distributed it for their friend.

In short, the national election in this country has not effective. It is caused by the people who were elected in it. In the first time of their campaign, they promised to us that they would safe this country and make it better than before but all of that are bulshit. So the National election have to be improved and safed to get the better condition and the corruptor will be decrease.