WRITING - OUTLINE II BY Dr. YUSRAN

OUTLINE

1.     INTRODUCTION

A.   GENERAL STATEMENT

Do you know what the National Election is? It is a process choosing some people to fill the positions in this country, such as president, governor, regent, and many others. In Indonesia, the National election is famous with its campaign. Every candidate has his or her own ways to get many votes from the society.

B.   THESIS STATEMENT

However, the National election in Indonesia has not effective even we may say that as the failed election Because the impact of it like corruption.

2.     BODY

Ø  Corruption is one of the reasons by the failed National election.

3.     CONCLUSION

In short, the national election in this country has not effective. It is caused by the people who were elected in it. In the first time of their campaign, they promised to us that they would safe this country and make it better than before but all of that are bulshit. So the National election have to be improved and safed to get the better condition and the corruptor will be decrease.

THE EFFECT OF FAILED NATIONAL ELECTION IN INDONESIA

Do you know what the National Election is? It is a process choosing some people to fill the positions in this country, such as president, governor, regent, and many others. In Indonesia, the National election is famous with its campaign. Every candidate has his or her own ways to get many votes from the society. However, the National election in Indonesia has not effective even we may say that as the failed election Because the impact of it like corruption.

Too many  corruption in this country. It is one of the reasons why the national election is not effective in this country. When the candidates do the campaign, they will spend a lot of money to drive the votes. After  they are elected, some of them forget with their promises before. Too many facts that show us about the cases of corruption. Wee may see the case of Engelina Sondakh. everybody In this country has known about her. She took the money of Wisma Atlet Company more than Rp. 10 billion. Beside that, she transferred  some money to Mirwan Amir as much as Rp. 8 billion as well to distributed it for their friend.

In short, the national election in this country has not effective. It is caused by the people who were elected in it. In the first time of their campaign, they promised to us that they would safe this country and make it better than before but all of that are bulshit. So the National election have to be improved and safed to get the better condition and the corruptor will be decrease. 

PHARAGRAPH ESSAY BY Dr. YUSRAN

OUTLINE

1.     INTRODUCTION

A.      GENERAL STATEMENT

how important the parent’s act for the children’s education ?. children and their parents are like a coin which have two sides. They can’t be separated especially in education program. in study, parent’s act is really important and very needed here

B.      THESIS STATEMENT

sometime, the children are motivated when their parents support them, beside that, they are the first and the best teachers for them and also to control what are their children doing.

2.     BODY

A.      The children are motivated when their parents support them

B.      Parents are the first and the best teachers for their children

C.      To control them when they are studying.

3.     Conclussion

In short, the parent’s act here is really important include the support, attention, and control in their children’s education. most of the children who are controlled by their parents somtime fall in the wrong way, even less the children who didn’t get the attention from their parents. so, for all of parents who have children in education, just keep and watch them when they are studying. It’s one way to prove your love to them.

 

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PARENT’S ACT IN CHILDREN’S EDUCATION

how important the parent’s act for the children’s education ?. children and their parents are like a coin which have two sides. They can’t be separated especially in education program. in study, parent’s act is really important and very needed here. Why ?.  sometime, the children are motivated when their parents support them, beside that, they are the first and the best teachers for them and also to control what are their children doing.

Some of parents are too busy with their working. Moreover, when they have a business in another city or even another country till they forget with the people who are always waiting for them at house. From this case of parents, many children become lazy to study because they feel that nobody supports them and they feel unloved by their parents. this is one of the examples which prove that support by the parents is really needed to improve their spirit when they study.

Next, we are born by our mother, and our father work hard just for keeping us. Some of babies, the first word that they know is mom then, dad. That’s why parents are the first teacher for us. Eventhough in nowadays we are thought by our teachers at school, our  mom and dad still be the best teacher for us. Their way to teach us is too different between the other who teach us also. They teach us about the ethic, politeness and so on that we can’t get it in the other places.

Beside that, the parent’s act here is very important to control their children when they are studying. In order the children join the learning seriously.  Some of students or teenagers feel free when they are not controlled by their parents. as a consequence, some of them fall in the wrong way. Such as they escape from captivity, didn’t do the homework, choose the wrong friends, impolite, lazy to study and any others failed ways. That’s why the attention of parents is very needed here to oversee their children when they study.

In short, the parent’s act here is really important include the support, attention, and control in their children’s education. most of the children who are controlled by their parents sometime fall in the wrong way, even less the children who didn’t get the attention from their parents. so, for all of parents who have children in education, just keep and watch them when they are studying. It’s one way to prove your love to them.