WRITING - OUTLINE II BY Dr. YUSRAN

OUTLINE

1.     INTRODUCTION

A.   GENERAL STATEMENT

Do you know what the National Election is? It is a process choosing some people to fill the positions in this country, such as president, governor, regent, and many others. In Indonesia, the National election is famous with its campaign. Every candidate has his or her own ways to get many votes from the society.

B.   THESIS STATEMENT

However, the National election in Indonesia has not effective even we may say that as the failed election Because the impact of it like corruption.

2.     BODY

Ø  Corruption is one of the reasons by the failed National election.

3.     CONCLUSION

In short, the national election in this country has not effective. It is caused by the people who were elected in it. In the first time of their campaign, they promised to us that they would safe this country and make it better than before but all of that are bulshit. So the National election have to be improved and safed to get the better condition and the corruptor will be decrease.

THE EFFECT OF FAILED NATIONAL ELECTION IN INDONESIA

Do you know what the National Election is? It is a process choosing some people to fill the positions in this country, such as president, governor, regent, and many others. In Indonesia, the National election is famous with its campaign. Every candidate has his or her own ways to get many votes from the society. However, the National election in Indonesia has not effective even we may say that as the failed election Because the impact of it like corruption.

Too many  corruption in this country. It is one of the reasons why the national election is not effective in this country. When the candidates do the campaign, they will spend a lot of money to drive the votes. After  they are elected, some of them forget with their promises before. Too many facts that show us about the cases of corruption. Wee may see the case of Engelina Sondakh. everybody In this country has known about her. She took the money of Wisma Atlet Company more than Rp. 10 billion. Beside that, she transferred  some money to Mirwan Amir as much as Rp. 8 billion as well to distributed it for their friend.

In short, the national election in this country has not effective. It is caused by the people who were elected in it. In the first time of their campaign, they promised to us that they would safe this country and make it better than before but all of that are bulshit. So the National election have to be improved and safed to get the better condition and the corruptor will be decrease. 

PHARAGRAPH ESSAY BY Dr. YUSRAN

OUTLINE

1.     INTRODUCTION

A.      GENERAL STATEMENT

how important the parent’s act for the children’s education ?. children and their parents are like a coin which have two sides. They can’t be separated especially in education program. in study, parent’s act is really important and very needed here

B.      THESIS STATEMENT

sometime, the children are motivated when their parents support them, beside that, they are the first and the best teachers for them and also to control what are their children doing.

2.     BODY

A.      The children are motivated when their parents support them

B.      Parents are the first and the best teachers for their children

C.      To control them when they are studying.

3.     Conclussion

In short, the parent’s act here is really important include the support, attention, and control in their children’s education. most of the children who are controlled by their parents somtime fall in the wrong way, even less the children who didn’t get the attention from their parents. so, for all of parents who have children in education, just keep and watch them when they are studying. It’s one way to prove your love to them.

 

NAME : MUJAHIDAH

GROUP : AG 3

NIM : 40300112074

 

PARENT’S ACT IN CHILDREN’S EDUCATION

how important the parent’s act for the children’s education ?. children and their parents are like a coin which have two sides. They can’t be separated especially in education program. in study, parent’s act is really important and very needed here. Why ?.  sometime, the children are motivated when their parents support them, beside that, they are the first and the best teachers for them and also to control what are their children doing.

Some of parents are too busy with their working. Moreover, when they have a business in another city or even another country till they forget with the people who are always waiting for them at house. From this case of parents, many children become lazy to study because they feel that nobody supports them and they feel unloved by their parents. this is one of the examples which prove that support by the parents is really needed to improve their spirit when they study.

Next, we are born by our mother, and our father work hard just for keeping us. Some of babies, the first word that they know is mom then, dad. That’s why parents are the first teacher for us. Eventhough in nowadays we are thought by our teachers at school, our  mom and dad still be the best teacher for us. Their way to teach us is too different between the other who teach us also. They teach us about the ethic, politeness and so on that we can’t get it in the other places.

Beside that, the parent’s act here is very important to control their children when they are studying. In order the children join the learning seriously.  Some of students or teenagers feel free when they are not controlled by their parents. as a consequence, some of them fall in the wrong way. Such as they escape from captivity, didn’t do the homework, choose the wrong friends, impolite, lazy to study and any others failed ways. That’s why the attention of parents is very needed here to oversee their children when they study.

In short, the parent’s act here is really important include the support, attention, and control in their children’s education. most of the children who are controlled by their parents sometime fall in the wrong way, even less the children who didn’t get the attention from their parents. so, for all of parents who have children in education, just keep and watch them when they are studying. It’s one way to prove your love to them.

WRITING - ESSAY PARAGRAPH ( Dr. YUSRAN )

NAME : MUJAHIDAH

GROUP : AG 3

Students learn TOEFL for several reasons. The first reason is with TOEFL test, it can measure our capability. It is content of listening, Writing, Structure, and Reading test. The score is usually revolve about 300 – 600. That’s why if they get the high points, it means that they have high capability in English skill and they will study hard to get the high and higher points because it is not easy to get it all. The second reason is with TOEFL, we can get the scholarship especially in abroad. Because they have to follow the TOEFL test. Every university has the standard of TOEFL. If they want to  join in a university, they have to fulfill the requirement of it especially for the TOEFL test. The third one, to finish their study especially for the Master and the Doctor. some universities have required it’s students if they want to finish their study, they have to fulfill their TOEFL score. Finally, it may help you to find  a job especially in the foreign company.

WRITING - ESSAY OUTLINE

Name:  MUJAHIDAH

Group : AG 3

NIM :  40300112074

Outlining an Essay

Return to Unit B

Directions:  Print the exercise.  Look at the essay below.  Read the essay and pay careful attention to how it is organized.  Complete the outline for the essay on the following pages.  Discuss the outline with a tutor.

ESSAY:  Learning to Listen in English

As a newcomer to the United States, have you ever had a difficult time understanding normal spoken English on TV, at work, or in school?  If you have, you are not alone.  Many beginning students of English have a difficult time learning to listen in English.  Listening can actually be one of the more difficult language skills to master, but there are a number of strategies that can help you comprehend spoken English better.  These strategies could be broken down into pre-, while-, and post-listening strategies.

The process of preparing yourself to listen to a TV program or classroom lecture is sometimes just as important as the actual practice of listening.  If you know that a lecture or TV program is going to be on a particular subject, you can practice the strategy of predicting.  Predicting is when you try to guess what you will hear before you actually hear it.  If you think about a subject before you listen and predict what is going to be said, you will understand more of the lecture or TV program as you listen.  Try asking yourself these questions before listening:  What is the topic?  What do I already know about the topic?  What do I need to know before I listen?  What can I predict will be said?

          An excellent while-listening strategy is the practice of making guesses about what you hear.  Oftentimes, people do not need to understand or hear every word of a lecture, conversation, or TV show to understand the main idea of what is being said.  Some ways of making good guesses in listening is to first pay attention to the speakers’ gestures and facial expressions.  These things can often communicate more than the words people say.  To practice this strategy, try listening to a video without sound.  Pay careful attention to the speakers’ gestures and facial expressions.  As you watch, try guessing what the speakers are saying.  When you are finished watching, rewind the tape to see if your guesses are correct.  You will probably be surprised at how much you were able to understand just by guessing!

          An important post-listening strategy that will help you become a better listener is evaluating.  You need to check to see if you what you understood from the TV program, lecture, or conversation is correct.  To do this, you can ask a classmate or co-worker to summarize what you just heard.  By doing this, you will be able to determine whether or not you are making progress in your listening skills or if you need to adjust your goals and expectations.

Learning to comprehend normal spoken English can sometimes be a difficult and frustrating experience for many beginning English language learners.  However, the strategies of predicting, guessing, and evaluating can help lessen some of the frustration.  Try these strategies today and see if you notice an improvement in your listening skills.

I.            Introduction

As a newcomer to the United States, have you ever had a difficult time understanding normal spoken English on TV, at work, or in school?  If you have, you are not alone.  Many beginning students of English have a difficult time learning to listen in English.  Listening can actually be one of the more difficult language skills to master, but there are a number of strategies that can help you comprehend spoken English better. 

Thesis Statement: 

 These strategies could be broken down into pre-, while-, and post-listening strategies.

II.  Body Paragraph One:

Topic Sentence:  The problem to understanding spoken english

          Supporting Ideas or Examples:

          A.  difficult to understand what they said                                                        

         

         

III.  Body Paragraph Two:

Topic Sentence:  the strategies to begin the listening

          Supporting Ideas/Examples:

A.   prepare your self before listening

          B.  make a predicting to the topic that you heard

          C.  Trying to asking your self about some question    

IV.  Body Paragraph Three:

Topic Sentence : The excellent strategies in Listening skill

          Supporting Ideas/Examples:

A.   you don’t need to understand or hear all the words that they said

B.   Pay your attention to the speaker’s gestures and facial expression

          C.  trying to watching a video without any sounds